Friday, 4 October 2013

Peer Editing Questions

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1.  Q: What do you think is the strongest part of the blog? This could be a certain post, the writing style, the graphic design, the use of alternative media, the images, etc. What makes this element so strong?
A: I really like the writing style it really portrays the character, it feels like she is really in tune with her characters emotions and disposition  It made me really believe in her. The picture she uses to represent herself which shows a high level of dedication. The background she uses makes me feel as if she really was Alex. The use of music and video links shows she has taken the time to research into the indie genre which is Alex's. 



2.  Q: Is there a part of the blog you find confusing? A part that doesn't seem to quite match the rest or the character for which it was designed? A link for which you don't understand the connection? Can you give some suggestions for how to improve that part?
A: When Holly put in her character description she was black I felt like no one would bother to put their race on their profile but other than that everything seem to fit the mould.



3.  Q: After reading the blog, what would you like to know more about? Is there a post that leaves you with questions? Write down at least two questions to help your partner further develop this blog.
A: What does Alex like to get up onto on weekends?
     Write something political? 
 4. Q:  Did you notice any major misspellings or grammatical issues? Please note down anything.
A: Nothing major, Her grammar was good for her character


5.  Did your partner fulfil all the requirements on the Character Blog Requirements handout? 
Q: Yes she's completed the task to the full!!! Well done Holly

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